Tell him I love to weave these words
into a song upon his luscious lips,
to make the rhythm of my heart
a gentle melody in his ears.
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lines romantic soft and sweet...breezing as one reads on...'make his heart be sunlight to my darkest sky...' is a pleasing phrase...good work, Jane...10
a lyrical and beautiful poem...it has a wonderful ring and rhythm to it....
wow! i'm speechless! i'm too lucky to have discovered this site! ^_^ well anyway i just wanted to inform you Jane that this poem left my heart warm and touched my face with a smile ^_^ thanks! -GanNi
This was well-written and beautiful.