A Little Squirrel (Fun Poem) Comments

Nice and had a great experience to make a poem and I liked the poem and the morale good job

A good poem with a good moral. More than just fun. Very good advice.

More than fun, this teaches us a gem of a life-lesson. Please read my poem Good, Bad and who knows........ for fun.Thank you for sharing.

Such an emotional poem. I love the way you use the squirrel as a metaphor for Hitler. Wonderful. It was like I was actually there. It's also nice how you use the treasure as a metaphor for Jews.

when i cry no one there when no money in my pocket when i have the legal money in my pocket many hand toward me are they crazy of money or me i dont get in to trouble free from afried rather than have cute respect of life respect make them to come up in life not the very quick higher

I had to check out this one because I've been making squirrel's costumes all week in preparation for my children's dance performance. They are such dear little critters, though quite feisty I'm told (the one's in my show certainly are!) . One of the dad's was telling me how they fed squirrels recently during a visit to the UK. Apparently the squirrels would take a nut deftly from the hand, run a few steps, stop, dig a little hole in the ground, pat down the earth firmly over it and scamper back for more. He was enchanted with them, as I am with this poem! love, Allie xxxx

What a fun little poem. I agree with shelia, do a childens short poem book and get someone to do the drawings

I love your 'fun' poems especially so. You have a fine sense of humor. Have you ever thought of writing some kids books. They'd totally dig this stuff!

Hi David such sense of humor Brilliant write Cheers Sylvie

Oh David, I too, have a little ground squirrel. he lives in my front yard. he has a front door and a back door...and he forages the pecans from neighbors tree's but sometimes, only when i am feeling that he has had a bad day, i help him out with some shelled walnuts, and he loves them. Loved your poem. What a writer you are my friend, and i adored this poem and it is worth a ten in my book! Warm regards, Theo

I know a 'little squirrel' who needs a map on where he left his keys and mobile phone! Enjoyed this, David.......now where did I leave my pen? .... Love, Fran xx

david this was really a very cute little poem, very touching.

Oh a fun poem, I love fun, it gives a really great feeling. This poem flows beautifully, great rhyme and a lot of fun to read. I love it David, thankyou my friend. ---Melvina---

10/10 even though it was a fun poem, you worded it very well it wasn't just nonsense, very good i loved it! Emily -x-

I enjoyed the flow, and yes! , I understand the concept of having a bad memory, but one must look at the bright side...YOU GET TO HIDE YOUR OWN EASTER EGGS Take care Love Duncan X

Oh nuts, always get you in trouble my friend... They drive you out of your tree... David..10 if i can be serious for once in my life... thanks for the complement i think...

Or could it be the blind one everyone talks about: O) Seriously though you put Aesop to shame Your's are way more funny