Monday, December 1, 2008

A Little Son's Promise Comments

Rating: 3.5

As i was wheeled to the operating room
His little voice still lingered in my ears
The anesthesia was successfully done
And before i went into a deep sleep
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Meggie Gultiano
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Hans Vr 07 March 2011

very touching, very nice, a warm lifelong memory. Inspiring for every reader. thanks for sharing this wonderful story in fluent poetry

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skimble skamble 24 March 2010

A very touching and personal poem. And what a son you have.

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Marilyn Lott 27 April 2009

A sweet and precious poem, Meggie. Children have such insight and touch our hearts so deeply. Wonderful poem! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Vaibhav Pandey 14 March 2009

very moving.....this poem touched me deeply.....you have a great son....10

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Robert Howard 06 December 2008

Elegant and touching. It seems that the kindness of your father echoes in the voice of your son by way of your own.

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JoAnn McGrath 01 December 2008

You added a few lines to this....makes it even more touching.....such a brave little soldier...you must be so proud of him.....nothing can take that memory away from you: O)

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 01 December 2008

So touching Meggie dear, children can do that... Andy 10

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Lynda Robson 01 December 2008

Words you will remember forever Meggie, touching and heartfelt, 10 Lynda xx

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