Sunday, October 26, 2008

A Little Slice Of Heaven Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've lived thru all those torrid days
hav starved out expecting friendlier ways
either bitter or sour, are the words u serve
u make me think, is it all i deserve
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Bhupinder Pant 08 November 2008

A little slice of heaven IS A GREAT LINE AND THE POEM ALSO A GREAT....

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Tj Becker 26 October 2008

Again a short but powerful write. Most humans ask for little to be happy, but some never get even a little slice of heaven. Well penned,

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 26 October 2008

this one is gr8 yaar. loved the way u expressed me. thanks

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