Friday, June 5, 2009

A Little Princess--Breshna Kahn (Sweet Tiny Daughter Of Afzal Shauq) /Heather Wilkins Comments

Rating: 4.5

Having a new friend in our
land,
To her, we extend our hand.
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Afzal Shauq
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Courtney Steele 07 November 2010

THAT WAS SWEET REMINDS ME OF MY NIECE & I LOVER TINKER BELL ;)

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Ezna Stephna 25 May 2010

A wonderful way to received your little princess......my blessing be with her what ever she do.....i like to be her fairly god mother to guide her through..........wearing her pink dress with the star in her hand..........she travel the world to cheer all children around........i will be her fairly god mother......fear not to let her go............ God bless you that he gave you a little angel to spend your days by.......10+++++++

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 10 May 2010

Beautiful way of welcoming ur sweet little angel, wonderful poem, filled with affectionat emotions.I loved reading it 10++

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 10 May 2010

Beautiful way of welcoming ur sweet little angel, wonderful poem, filled with affectionat emotions.I loved reading it 10++

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Andrea Segundo 07 May 2010

beautiful, lovely, and a real true fairy tail to a princess life

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 12 April 2010

Beautiful poem that rhymes and chimes...so sweet.

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this is a really beautiful poem it so sweet and lovin 10/10 keep up the good work

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Annabel Sheila 14 January 2010

What a beautiful soul you are....your love for your little daughter is beautiful! I loved this tribute to her. Outstanding....... Anna

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Kelly Aragon 09 January 2010

That was a lovely written poem. It had a beautiful simplicity and was very sweet. I give it a 10++++

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Sahar Sahar 02 December 2009

Wonderful poem, shining, like stars........

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Rosa Banks 29 November 2009

that was sweet i bet your daughter would love this poem!

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Naazia Thomas 03 November 2009

Thank you for showing others how to love and communicate with daughters.... For you are a book that should not be judged by it's cover.! ***

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Pitilosi Mdala 05 October 2009

I call this poem a complete poem with good arrangement of stanzas

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Israh Sadan 17 August 2009

A wonderfully sweet peom filled with all the pleasure and promise that a baby girl brings.

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Beauty Philosophy 08 August 2009

A poetic welcome to your sweet princess! Birth is the best event one can celebrate and write about! It is one of the magical moments in life to stop at, contemplate. Birth is where the whole MYSTERY of existence lies. But women are much more lacky to be chosen by nature and God to be the ones who enjoy/ endure this magical moment... Enjoy the arrival of your angel and observe closely the evolution of this tiny being! you will touch the Beauty of creation and the BEAUTY of GOD all through... Nice poem, language and style.

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Hadyn Rodriguez 26 July 2009

That's so sweet I like it alot

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Kimbaline Navas 25 July 2009

this is like a dream in a land of what every you like

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Winnie Angel 19 July 2009

Beautiful way of welcoming a sweet daugther in a new fairy world..Lucky and lovely to land in such land with a sweet guide as a father...................lucy father and daugther...Winnie

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Shashendra Amalshan 12 July 2009

this is sweet write indeed! ! ! ! great gift for an angel i should say.. lovely and filled with affectionate emotions.. really felt those lines! ! ! with love shan

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Sadiqullah Khan 11 July 2009

What a lovely poem, Breshna, may you be like shower of happiness for your parents and all around you.10 plus

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