A little place,
Around the turn,
Small and quite,
But nothing to hold.
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What a picture you have painted, nothing comforting for a bed to keep you warm and secured as you sleep throughout the night. Interesting.
This is a very good poem what was you feeling when you wrote it
cold and alone in the night... i liked the way you present a situation here in line to your thoughts running inside...talking words...10