Monday, September 14, 2009

A Little Place Comments

Rating: 5.0

A little place,
Around the turn,
Small and quite,
But nothing to hold.
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Emily Harris
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Kesav Easwaran 17 June 2010

cold and alone in the night... i liked the way you present a situation here in line to your thoughts running inside...talking words...10

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Obinna Eruchie 15 September 2009

What a picture you have painted, nothing comforting for a bed to keep you warm and secured as you sleep throughout the night. Interesting.

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Christopher Doddridge 14 September 2009

This is a very good poem what was you feeling when you wrote it

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