Sometimes I feel like a sucker for poetry, not a fool, I just love the passion,
I will rather let my pen bleed on paper-my satisfaction
Sometimes am blinded by my pride and pen action
Girls, praises, commendations, quite a distraction
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You do indeed have the passion, Austin. 'Bleeing on paper' is necessary (then, I don't post EVERYTHING I've bled-which is not meant as a comment on your writing.) You have a strong energy, and if you're ever inclined, I'd like to see how it would express itself in free verse. (If I said that before, long ago, forgive me. I can't remember.)