Tuesday, August 12, 2008

A Little More-They Say Comments

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The earth rotates on its axis-
They say.
What if the axis topples one day?
How much longer can it hold
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jyoti saxena
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Ted M 18 August 2009

Well penned. Nice observation. What if the axis topples one day? Sometimes you get the feeling. the wild animals in the Jungle are not the dangerous ones.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 24 May 2009

earth still flows even by the reeks all when betides by time unsavory, , , , , wonderful feeling by humanity, as we lose our ecology of living, ingenious write,10++, thanks for sharing

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Vinod Kumar 20 January 2009

Good Title, the scientists are calculating with nano tech, the mother is passed half of her age, one day it will stuck, then.....? very nice poem.10++

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 August 2008

Jyoti! This is certainly a great thought, well penned into a beautiful poetic form. Every line, every word is meaningful sathya narayana

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