Friday, February 9, 2007

A Little Monday Night Venting Comments

Rating: 5.0

You act as if you're superior
When your ignorance makes you inferior
You've been complimented one too many times, dear
And wonder why it is no one holds you dear
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Amanda Saveley
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Agnes Török 30 July 2007

I have yet to find any poet that could live up to the exactness of your poems, to that critical and needed, yet hurtfull truth. Each and every of you words is sharp as a blade and you cut through every layer, every single stone of foundation that our society lies upon. All my best /Agnes

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The Dead Poet 10 February 2007

Psych, is truly a good fit for you, you perceive the underlying meanings of things. That is what makes a good therapist, should you choose to become one. I should know, I am one. I am adding this poem to my favorites and ranking it a 10! I cant wait to read more

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Preeti - is here! 10 February 2007

that is a whole lot of venting, but not necessarily senseless. I like it! Preets

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Ronald Stroman 09 February 2007

my mother says: one can... lose perspective being wise for someone else.

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