A Little Merman (Fun Poem 51) Comments

simple but perfect loving entertaining and its really touching and like based on a real story

David....This story touched my heart, just loved it. And by the way it's no fun poem? Love.....Risha

David, what an imaginative and most original cautionary tale. Something of a sermon, methinks. I wouldn't just call it a 'fun poem'. I'd call it a twenty first century parable. And I'm sure there are lots more where that one came from too. I am most impressed. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥

LOL....I'm still at picturing Gunga Din as a 'Merman'...cute little story though: O)

Mr. Genie genial ingenious congenial elegent - brilliant