A thousand stars fall
When you fling at me a stare
While walking past me in the village fair
The sparkle in your eyes
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Love at first sight...but lost like a fallen star, you've written it beautifully.
Very nice, heartfelt poem. Made me sad that what once brought you happiness has now disappeared.
A chance meeting with a lovely girl in a village fair aroused a one-sided infatuation. The affair ended as if a dream had turned sour. The entire narrative is highly captivating. You were no more to be seen In the field, barn or by the river
Thanks very much Sir for reading and wonderful comment. Regards.