Sunday, August 18, 2013

A Little Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

A thousand stars fall
When you fling at me a stare
While walking past me in the village fair

The sparkle in your eyes
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Rajnish Manga 23 November 2016

A chance meeting with a lovely girl in a village fair aroused a one-sided infatuation. The affair ended as if a dream had turned sour. The entire narrative is highly captivating. You were no more to be seen In the field, barn or by the river

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 November 2016

Thanks very much Sir for reading and wonderful comment. Regards.

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Meena Mustafa 21 August 2013

Beautifully expressed :) Love at first sight...

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Yasmin Khan 20 August 2013

Love at first sight...but lost like a fallen star, you've written it beautifully.

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Lorraine Colon 19 August 2013

Very nice, heartfelt poem. Made me sad that what once brought you happiness has now disappeared.

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