Thursday, June 4, 2009

A Little Light Comments

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What was once full of colour,
Reflects back in black and white,
Little letters lodged away,
As if to be found some day,
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Craig Turner
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sky dreams 06 December 2009

it's amazing what time and experiences can do to a person.. this poem is written with such truth and sadness.. the metaphors - 'bitterness tears holes in the chair' are perfectly put within this poem.. once again, great write craig

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Sarah Abdullah 19 July 2009

Bitterness tears holes in the chair, Signs of an angry young man, Frustrated and lonely, What might have been, What should have come, Dreams fade away, Asleep in the chair alone with his chance to dream Love those lines.... Beautiful....

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Sara Tehrani 04 June 2009

hay its me again lol...bet im the last person u wana get a comment from! im sure other people will comment soon. but reading this almost made me cry: (so sad, but beautifully written, wel done :)

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