Monday, June 13, 2011

A Little Lie To Comfort Me Comments

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Wanting not that which ye hold so high
Leaves this heart of mine contented
For it can not fail were it does not try
It remains free from the tormented
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Colm Hayes
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Damian Cranney 16 September 2013

excellent rhyme and metre, nice poem

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Pandian Chelliah 15 June 2011

beautiful poem. the last para is esp very beautiful 'Joyous solitude stands alone To watch the rough waves of emotion Little boats are shook and blown Into the deeps of the ocean ' keep writing. best wishes :)

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