Thursday, February 28, 2008

A Little Guy Comments

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he smiles and turns verbal somersaults
not saying what rankles him most

about others who are not his kind
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Michael Pruchnicki
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James Mclain 19 October 2009

sounds like when he was doing summersaults.. he split in half.. and met his other...iip

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Mignon Bryant 19 August 2008

Good job! I think everyone knows someone just like this! Your descriptive words are terrific. :)

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Meggie Gultiano 07 April 2008

this is a nice write.Thanks for sharing, Mike..

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K. V. Venkataramana 05 April 2008

A beautiful poem in which a little guy's behaviour is analysed.

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Rudy Hossam 01 March 2008

'A little guy' it's a really great poem but to write it i doubt that u'd be the little guy the ways u put the words together and describe is amazing

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Ivor Hogg 01 March 2008

pompous little men have something to proveand only by putting others down can they feel important

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Frank Cannon 29 February 2008

I love the musicality of this work, besides which you accurately describe all the main symptoms of 'small man syndrome'. Nice one.

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Angel Hulbert 28 February 2008

I am glad you can write honestly about yourself, good on you and bless you

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C.R. Clark 28 February 2008

I'm sure I've met this guy, once or twice. He sounds so familiar. Thanks for sharing. Richard

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