A Little Girl's Story Comments

A very intensely emotional and poignant poem, so well written taking us into the life of this little girl. You have great compassion for others in life, because you have experienced so much heartache yourself. Experience has been your teacher and you have learned well, that truth is exposed in what you have written. You have amazing talent as a poet, I can identify with woe as I have had much of it also. Keep writing, Vittal and I will continue reading your poetry. Thank you for sharing it, RoseAnn

Orphanage in another word is a curse and a synonym to poverty.Very well written and realistic verses here.I appreciate this good poetry and may God help the orphaned with his and her best of graces.

You are a very gifted young Poet, It is a pleasure to read your gifts. Raw though it is in places, it comes from the heart. I hope soon to see you in brighter pastures. As Jesus Loves you, you will soon shine and be free from the Gloom.I cannot wait to see you in Love. That will Light up your Life.The sooner the better I say.

all this from the mind of a fifteen year old? i salute and bow to your genius! 10/10 way to Go.

nice narrative poem, nice rhymes, thank you for sharing...10+++

nice poem about loneliness of orphan. very sad though.

you have brought the depth of the sadness in your poem...lovely

hmm.. a nice sad story of an orphan... :)