A Little Girl's First School Day Comments

your the best poet i ever heard of and i see you like cats you have a few cat ones!

A universal rite of passage told with beauty and sensitivity. This casts a whole new light on 'fear of the unknown.' Confronting new information and meeting new people with whom you must get along to a significant degree can be distressing - especially if you happen to be five years old.

Love this..esp. this line..'little vine climbing in her mother's vine'.Good imagery..thanks for this wonderful sharing. hugs, Meggie

I love the idea of the little vine climbing in her mother-vine's lap! Such a delicate poem, i loved it...you must have such a delicate soul, i am glad to 'meet' you online. And it is true indeed: 'the truth will set you free'...our Lord Jesus said that.

Hey this is really good! Very deep, I enjoyed alot. Especially the line about the vines, very good imagery. 'll have to check out more. I'm new to this, but I have some stuff and could use feedback from good poets.