his eyes are evil, mine filled with fear
he stroked me on my back and called me dear
he kissed my neck as i try to fight him off
then he hits me so hard i bleed when i cough
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Very very strong I loved it very much especially since I can relate because it happened to me
Rape is the most painful crime and very common in every part of the world. You have courageously created a situation to address it. Best Wishes. Naseer
This is an indictment on the crimes perpetuated by pedophiles all over the world. You drive home a strong message and people should take heed and be vigilant in guarding our young ones against these conscienseless ogres. Well written.
this is a powerful satement on abuse that is prevalent in today's society...reminding me a poem that I once wrote which paralled it in 'The Little Boy On The Bench' I hope you get a chance to peruse it...............
Wow! I am speechless! ! this was so well written, so deep, it makes you feel that fear, the hurt, its just wow. Great stuff! ! ! this is a really powerful poem, the sort that can change the world (or the few people who read it) great stuff!