Tuesday, February 24, 2009

A Little Girl's Fear Comments

Rating: 3.4

his eyes are evil, mine filled with fear
he stroked me on my back and called me dear
he kissed my neck as i try to fight him off
then he hits me so hard i bleed when i cough
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tanesha davenport
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Nangula Immanuel 07 April 2009

Wow! I am speechless! ! this was so well written, so deep, it makes you feel that fear, the hurt, its just wow. Great stuff! ! ! this is a really powerful poem, the sort that can change the world (or the few people who read it) great stuff!

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Michael Nkwocha 10 March 2009

great creativity Tanesha. keep it up.

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Ana Guerrero 07 March 2009

Very very strong I loved it very much especially since I can relate because it happened to me

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 07 March 2009

Rape is the most painful crime and very common in every part of the world. You have courageously created a situation to address it. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Eddie Roa 24 February 2009

This is an indictment on the crimes perpetuated by pedophiles all over the world. You drive home a strong message and people should take heed and be vigilant in guarding our young ones against these conscienseless ogres. Well written.

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Tim H 24 February 2009

Nice poem. I am glad its not true

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Barry A. Lanier 24 February 2009

this is a powerful satement on abuse that is prevalent in today's society...reminding me a poem that I once wrote which paralled it in 'The Little Boy On The Bench' I hope you get a chance to peruse it...............

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