Tuesday, June 24, 2008

A Little Girl Named...Pumpkin Comments

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I got a wakeup call.
The alarm struck a cord.
The endless...realm called reality.
I dranked in your innocence.
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Rayniece D. Clayborne
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Aaron Eliad 25 April 2009

So personal and delicate, as if reading it were similar to reading a small child. I think the line that spoke to me the most was - 'and me your auntie, I'll be the lady who looks like your mommy.' Well played =D

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Blue Eyes 08 July 2008

i like this poem i would love to hear the second part of the dialogue i mean when the girl speaks

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