A Little Girl Lost Comments

The lonely night; The effects of drugs Are wearing off… great write great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

...a powerful poem.......

it's such a pleasure to read your work again. This is very touching, as most of your work is. It grabs the emotions, shakes them up, and allows us to feel... Excellent, as usual. Warmest regards, CJ Heck

Very good writing...and true; also, sad. 'Little One, Little Voice' is about what we see happening with children today; 'Inside Her Little World'..thank you...10 for this and probably for others of yours...

It's so hard to imagine that so many young and older women are living this reality. I know several women in this situation right now, here in Calgary, Alberta. A sad but lovely piece. Thankyou-----Melvina

Uriah, This is so sad and inevitable - the downward spiral of neglect goes on down and down and down. Lonely words, sensitively portrayed. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Short poem with a great impact. Amazing.

But you are full of promise, your achiements are shown so well whilst studying at the University Of Life.Love Duncan

a very amazing write with compassion and strength in your very well written words

This is a part of society people try to ignore and forget. It's wonderful to know there are writers out there who still see them. Brava!

brutally honest for our our sadistic society.. Brilliant! HBH

nice imagery. you portray deep thought.

you've captured quite well the hopelessness and fear you feel 'when the drugs wear off'. there is nothing more terrifying. great poem. Jake

no, it really doesn't...well written my friend

I hope she's not one of yours. Very well written. H

Such a sad state for someone to be in.....I've been there once or twice. You wrote it so well.

Yes...yes...this hits a note much like my high school years. A sad state to be in and surrounded by.

Such a sad poem....the hopelessness you convey is so clear. Great poem Uriah. Sincerely, Mary

uriah, the desolation here is immaculately captured. salut.