Wednesday, August 14, 2013

A Little Girl Is Crying Comments

Rating: 5.0

A life that didn't stand a chance
destroyed before it began
like a sacrifice to the slaughter
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Dave Alan Walker
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Valsa George 27 April 2014

Often we become passive spectators to others misfortune....! We never bother to lift even a little finger to reduce another's pain....! Some are so callous that they enjoy seeing the tears of their fellow beings! Let no child cry on the streets unattended!

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Valsa George 27 April 2014

Often we become passive spectators to others misfortune....! We never bother to lift even a little finger to reduce another's pain....! Some are so callous that they enjoy seeing the tears of their fellow beings! Let no child cry on the streets unattended!

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Rubab Atwal 03 December 2013

amazingly beautiful.enjoyed it alot.its the best poem i have read.

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Queeny Gona 25 August 2013

Thought provoking write dear Dave. It reminds us of our reluctant and dumb attitude towards the unpleasant things happening on streets! Great write. Stirring the minds of public to reciprocate the right way at times.

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Valerie Dohren 16 August 2013

Thought-provoking and very moving. Excellent write.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 16 August 2013

Sad reality is described in the poem. The difference between watching and looking is brought out with clarity. Thank you.

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David Wood 16 August 2013

Those who sell crack should be made to eat it.

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Heather Wilkins 15 August 2013

an interesting write. sad for the little girl

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Jemima Rivas 15 August 2013

heartfelt, this is quite interesting thank you

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 August 2013

Fantastic write..life destroyed before it began..Touching poem indeed, with a great message.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 15 August 2013

agree with Lyn.. simple but strong and true nice written

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Lyn Paul 14 August 2013

Shocking reality told in very few words. Very well written

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