Monday, November 28, 2005

A Little Girl Cries Comments

Rating: 5.0

A little girl cries as she sits alone on the edge of her bed,
So perfectly made in her room so neat and tidy,
The one thing that has changed in this sad story,
Is that the little girl has now grown into a woman,
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CHARMAINE SIMPSON
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James B. Earley 07 July 2008

A painful introspection....vividly expressed! Be well.

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Jimmy Watkinson 20 September 2006

Strong and emotive. Your power of words never fails to amaze me. The image is so strong that one desires to weep. Such good work. jw

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Kimberly Strothman Anderson 02 December 2005

I feel your pain, very well written.

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CHARMAINE SIMPSON

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