Friday, January 15, 2016

A Little Girl..Asha.. Comments

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My new friend whose name is Asha
Asha is a nine year old little girl
Asha lives in a slum twenty miles away from my house
Asha and I met first time on bus stop
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abhilasha bhatt
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M Asim Nehal 30 January 2016

Asha (Wish) Like her name she will definitely fulfill her wish..........May God bless her and the poetess who introduced her to us by her beautiful poetry....10+++

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Nosheen Irfan 29 January 2016

Very heart-touching poem. There are so many children in this world who have big dreams but dont have the means to fulfill their dreams. To adopt n give education to such children is the greatest thing man can do. The poem gives a beautiful message of humanity.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 January 2016

Positive friends are friends forever. Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 January 2016

Wow..so amazing to have friendship to little girl. Having love and hope for her is definitely interesting. Nice drafting shared on.10

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