A little fun keeps you young;
A little laughter keeps you bright.
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Superb write and very sharp humor, love the thoughts in this kyrielle poem. The last lines repeated gave the poem a lot of pizazz. Happy New Year Meggie.
toit this is the 5th characher and I need 20 that is not noice and toit but those poems were noice and toit
Don’t worry what others say Having fun reading this anyway......good!
Wonderful little poem. Enjoyed this one a lot. Thanks for sharing.
This certainly was a fun poem to read. I didn't laugh out load, but I came close. Thanks for posting this.
I certainly did have fun - and laughed out loud at some of the images. Well done Meggie and friends. And I'm with Ivor, if i gotta get old, I'm going to make the most of it.
I aim to grow old disgracefully I have behaved well for long enough It is past time to enjoy some fun You are only as old as you feel
A very comic and funny poem however contain a meaningful verses and good advices. Thanks for your comment :) Merna.
'A little fun keeps you young; A little laughter keeps you bright. When you get to that age'... Funny and amusing...fun apart, i find a ray of wisdom in those quoted lines...do you mean a kid daughter- a grand daughter- will keep us 'young' when we get to that 'age' Meggie? ...excellent piece...10
They say laughter is the best medicine and an effective therapy too.It displaced the stress and depression that were also known as the silence killer.Well Meggie, your poem has kept me going, at least for another day lol.They prolonged my zest to embark to a more refreshing day.Thanks for the gift my dear Meggie.Love ya.Have fun a little more. brett.
Meggie, you and the guys have done a fabulous job with this crazy fun filled poem. To clown around makes the world a happier place, and as you say, the neighbors are crazy anyway. To release the happy child in us is an enriching experience. We have laughter clubs in our city where people just go and laugh together for quite long periods of time and it helps their lives so much! 10 Karin Anderson
Wonderful write, , made me smile from start to finish, well done all of you, 10 Lynda xx :)
This is a fun poem from beginning to end and the advice given is sound - - it flows with a fun-rhythm - 10 + ++ Fay
with a smile i say kudos to this poem....a fun to read and it peps up your mood
This is a very charming, entertaining, and enjoyable write, Meggie, and a splendid collaboration with two other poets. It certainly brought a smile to my face, and despite what the crazy neighbors may think, it seems you have found the secret to leading a happy life! Carl.
I had quite a lot of fun reading this delightful; piece Meggie....10+++
Lol! ! ! ! .........Loved this...it had me smiling all the way through....excellent! ! ! ....I'll have to remember this for when I get struck by the mid-life hunger....Keep them coming guys..10+++++
I've a mid life crissis oh what shall I do I'm all tied up in poetry to from the early morn till late at night words just arrive they argue and fight each want a place inside a rhyme I sit and laugh, you'll all get time just leave me alone in peace for awhile then you can all come togetther in some new rhyme..lol......have fun..John
A good poem, lovely, fun, light, I liked it very much.