Saturday, March 29, 2014

A Little Drink Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes I think I think
on the brink,
my mind in overtime
needs a little drink -
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Smoky Hoss
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Juan Olivarez 29 April 2014

I don't drink anymore, I dont drink any less either. I just need a drink right now. Good poem.

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Valerie Dohren 09 April 2014

Good for sleep too Smoky. Think I'll have a little drink.

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Lawerence Mize 30 March 2014

Think I'll take you up on that advise Smoky. Always enjoy your poems.

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Dave Walker 29 March 2014

A great poem, sometimes all that is needed is a little drink.

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