Tuesday, May 9, 2006

A Little Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

It’s trembling sadly in the misty air,
It fears to near you and touch your arm.
I squint at it, and I see it get scared.
I remain calm and silent not to harm
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Jolanta Gradowicz
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 April 2008

its a little dream.....but full of dreams.........

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Donny S 16 June 2006

I can feel this dream as though it's in front of me! Great poem written here Ms Jolanta, keep up the good work! [a 10/10 from me...] - Dona

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Patricia Gale 16 June 2006

Dreams big or small I believe help the creative flow. Which this write is. Patricia Gale

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Sandra Fowler 09 May 2006

What a poignant and wistful write. Dreams are essential to the creative process. My applause for this one. Warm regards, Sandra

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