Sunday, September 27, 2009

A Little Ditty Comments

Rating: 3.7

He was caught looking at a hooker
It landed him in a pressure cooker
With his wife letting out the steam
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Sandra Martyres
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Prakash Mehra 10 October 2009

Good sense of humor. God bless you.

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Anand Madhukar 06 October 2009

Hahahaha. A wonderfully humorous piece.

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Eyan Desir 05 October 2009

Lol this made me laugh hmm that's a 10 in my book

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Vijay Menon 04 October 2009

a roving eyes of a philanderer always tries to hook a hooker, but the alert spouse caught him before his pants went down, my god she must have pummelled him and made a mince meat of him.10 nice write

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Indira Babbellapati 29 September 2009

thnx for reviving my sense of humour at this hour...

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Sathyanarayana M V S 29 September 2009

Hahahahahah! Sandra, this is marvelous and the words really fitted so well suiting the humourous content.........wow! you excel in every style.

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~ Jon London ~ 29 September 2009

Seems to be a good crack whipping put these adventurous eyes firmly in place lol..................great work Sandra....This really get the chuckle bones going...really enjoyed this humorous piece my lovely...thanks for sharing it with me 10+++

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Meggie Gultiano 29 September 2009

whoooops..ha ha..you're marvelous.Now I can see the other side of you.Love this piece.

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Michael Harmon 28 September 2009

A very witty piece, Sandra. The three-line stanzas are a clever choice for this particular subject. :)

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A little ditty with a little bitty of fun fun fun! It's great to have a laugh like I have with this one Sandra. love Karin

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Rakesh Bedi 27 September 2009

ha ha ha.....thanx for introducing the humorous sandra, dear.....

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 27 September 2009

lovely humor...pressure cooker...steam...house arrest...a roving eye test...examiner....lovely to read

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Carol Gall 27 September 2009

lolol love your humor 10

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Patti Masterman 27 September 2009

I can't stop laughing (can't even type- gasp) first I read your poem and then the genius wit beneath it; 'unhappy wife, unhappy life' which I adore, and have never heard before. Enjoyed your poem immensely, Sandra.

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Robert E Hann 27 September 2009

HAHA......Can't say, 'Been there'.......but if I could, I know just where he'd be. Unhappy wife, unhappy life! .... world now filled with pain and strife. Better hide the butcher knife.........is the advice from me. Good one Sandra! Keeps us on out toes...'Yes Dear' .haha

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