A Little Crush Comments

Gloria, I appreciate your note and the effort you must have put in to write your poem, 'A Little Crush'...I agree with Lynn, you must take time to re-read any thing you write for grammatical errors. Use your spell check (the tools ck) at the top of your page which will also help with grammar. Also check grammar in your profie sketch..remember this is only a critique and in no way meant to deminish your poem...keep writing...study the parts of speech and how they work. You will become a better writer. Dorothy Alves Holmes A Poet Who Loves To Sing Rewrite this poem and I promise to read it again, if you like...

Gloria, I like the poem, however there are some grammar and spelling errors. Take a few minutes and reread the poem, I think you will see what I saw. Overall a very good job. Lynn