Monday, September 8, 2008

A Little Country Town Comments

Rating: 5.0

It is a tiny little town in Oklahoma
Canute is the Indian name
Built out in the red dirt
Where lottery brought it to fame
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Marilyn Lott
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Your picture is simple, lovely, visual with nostalgia and colors of life and innocence. Actually you save Innocence and this is a value added of the poem. I give you a 10, dear Marilyn Lott! !

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Kesav Easwaran 20 September 2008

a good write...the last stanza lines tell a truth in poetic words...ten for this, Marilyn

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Alison Cassidy 20 September 2008

What a pretty picture postcard poem. Charming. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Stephanie Fiddy 17 September 2008

Very nice! i expect this is your home town. What a nice way to show your love for it. Love it :) 10

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David Threadgold 10 September 2008

Hi Marilyn. I feel as though I'm travelling down this road, great visual projection in your rhyming story. well done **10**. Regards Dave.

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Thad Wilk 08 September 2008

'Little' country towns, to visit - Sounds like fun! They always have a 'little' something there (of interest) - For everyone! Best wishes! *10*! Friend Thad

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Joseph Poewhit 08 September 2008

paints a pretty picture of quietness

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Marilyn Lott

Marilyn Lott

Washington state USA
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