A Little Boy Wrote A Rhyme Comments

with a touch of innocence.. classical...the title is captivating.. the thoughts are impressive interesting to read...a story in poetry... 10+++ lovelots, Maia

well penned i like the story well done poet Luwi

A classic story in poetry, enjoyed it! Top marks.

Wow what a lovely tale and one written 17 years ago, how great! (Wish I could find some of my old poetry) . Beau this is such a poignant read, I can sense this girl never left you, what is it with unfinished love, seems to leave a mild smouldering that never quite goes.... Lovely piece. HG: -) xx

Amazing piece.. the twist adds well.