A Little Bit Of Terrificness Comments

The first stanza is terrific... 'It' comes in you to exist but your drifting ways allows it to exit... you say 'your comfortable useless habits'.....getting rid of... Your this ‘terrific ness’ drifts beautifully all through the rest of the poem... for this gift you end the poem with glorious thanks giving to the Father and the 'Sun' Lot of things I liked in this poem...ten gifts

O.k, o, k, you don't have to tell me just where you got this from only that you should just keep on writing just like it, , your originality is so obvious to the viewer (((((((((( IT'S AMAZING))))))) ah! why don't I read you more, so many poets to cover Seriously though Lawrence this is without a doubt my favourite of yours, Beautiful, expressive, and so well connected, THANKYOU Love duncan X