A Little Bit Of Darkness Comments

Very real poem....I felt the pain in this one.

Unusual and moving take on grief. The short lines convey muteness in pain.

I very much like this poem

I very much like this poem

This is a great poem, and a 10 in my book.

Although a brilliant piece of writing. It has rings of a different emotion from your usual. I sense that you have recently experienced something that created this change in mood. 10 to infinity again Hugs Jan

A powerfull piece of poetry, a little different not long not short but narrow in style I sense a slight change from herbert, let me know via email so we have privacy in our conversation, you have a ten with a zero and well deserved With a warmth allan

This was well done, Herbert

Very good touching poem.The flow was good.Thank you.

Very nice, not a word less would have been so sweet. I really enjoyed reading this. Loved the form, you had me right to the end.10+