Thursday, May 4, 2023

A Little Bit More Comments

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A time left to waste, yet a lot could have been done about it (pondering about it) ,
Nothing was to call to fault apart from us, the perpetrators of our own parting.
A little more time devoted to us was all that was needed, but your own selfishness couldn't let you.
Self-seeking you were, provoked by your self-centeredness.
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D.N. Rebb 05 May 2023

This poem speaks volume.The hurt is compassionately sensed. I truly loved it. Keep writing

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Gerald Opio 05 May 2023

Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate your opinion on this.

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