A Little Bit Comments
I'm a little bit funny, a little bit mad,
a little bit happy, a little bit sad,
a little bit holy, a little bit bad,
I'm a little man Tordy, a little bit odd.
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I'll forever be thankful to a zillion times, for giving me a wonderful family. _______________________________________________________ Family. They're there through all our quirkiness. Wonderful.
thanks, for the comment, I was thinking that in all the things I've gone through without their encouragement and support I could never make it through anything I've faced so far.
A refined poetic imagination, Marvin. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.
sure I will Jazib Kamalvi :) thanks for reading my poem, it's an honor :)
I broke my heart a thousand times, a little bit badly, I found myself a million times, a little bit lonely, God comfort me a billion times, a little bit lavishly, I'll forever be thankful to God a zillion times, for giving me a wonderful family. Smiled after reading your little poem... soooooooooooo nice. wonderful imagination and very well depicted. like your poem very much. tony
thank you so much Dr. Tony Brahmin :) , it's always a pleasure, I've been posting my poems on a different site, but will post them here, my reply is a bit late, but thank you, I'm glad it made you smile :)
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7/24/2025 7:47:48 PM # 1.0.0
Well articulated and elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful work of art written with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Marvin.