A Little Angel's Soul Comments

Dear Sweta, i cried after reading your poem. in india they are killing girls when they are born or they abort girl fetus. it is so pathetic. it is terrible crime. you pictured it so well my dear. i cried. you have a rare ability to picture such terrible emotions into words. thank you very much God bless you

it hurt me badly when doctor cut me know of pieces...in such a well-written poem i hate to see what i think are careless mistakes. ....i refer to know of pieces. maybe this is understood/acceptable somewhere, but the use of know here seems like an error. it certainly is a passionate plea to end the abortion of girl babies, but i do question some of your facts. i am pro-choice though i do not ridicule those who are pro-life. i don't care for the form of the poem [it seems too much like prose], but due to the flow and good construction i give it a good grade. thanks for sharing. :)

A very touching and realistic picture of today. Your poem is indeed an eye opener. Keep writing.