Our body may not be
what we think it to be
it could be much more in a sense
it could be a listener to world's resonance
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‘…the inbuilt listener we don't honor…’ Why but? Excellent poem Ten++ dr.sakti
It's certainly a perspective worthy of consideration. Very contemplating in the face of tragedy...truly sad...that things like this occur. Thanks for sharing.
A few pertinent questions raised on man’s limitations. Yes, it’s said, animals have that sixth sense against impending dangers, whereas man is deficient in it. Sometimes even animals can’t help it, as for example when a river is in spate. Anyway, man is unfortunately distancing himself from nature and so some of his native talents have already slipped into disuse…heavily depending as he is on external means. A thought-provoking composition.
thanks for drawing my attention to this wonderful poem. its true. wish here was something that could be done.
This poem is an urgent call. Yes, why don´t we listen to our inner voice? You are so right, we desperately need that tool NOW! Thank you!
A profound piece about mankind being disconnected with its inner voice as well as with nature. I loved its meditative and contemplative flow.
Beautiful and well thought out poem. It seems human do not listen to inner self or voice within. I believe we have instincts like animals but have been conditioned to listen to the outside voices of humans. Thanks for sharing this informative poem. I learned things about the Tsunami that I didn't know. this poem could be a 'teachable moment' for the world, It deserved a 10+++
Its a beautiful write, Sir I read many of your poems and I awe everytime. its just that I am not expressive enough to write what I think of them! they are all wow! ! ! thanks for sharing
A beautiful poem - to regain the 'sensitivity of the soul', may be, we ought to read more and more poetry- thanks for making me read this poem of yours- as there are so many new poems everyday, sometimes we miss to read worth-reading poems
We have lost the ear that listens to many warnings inside us my friend. Sadly the channel sometimes gets blocked by the sound of the cash registar bell ringing.-10
yes, its sad we have lost touch with our instincts and are no longer tuned to nature. you have brought out your thoughts very well through this poem Samanyan.10 mamta
Really we are far beyond the reach of the savants of nature and elude our mind with ignorance. A fantastic poem there, yes it is just like the fading away of our dreams which we had as children
A very good write calling for reflection. Actually, it's true that the listening sense is much more developed in some animals, yet the MIND GIFT is granted only to human beings, so it's better for us to use this gift in order to think about the REASON of everything and about the essence of the universe itself.
This is so true, as we grow up we lose our instincts and are not so in touch with nature..... then tragedies such as Tsunamis happen and well we know the rest. Good and interesting poem Ruthy
Animals can always sense danger much sooner than humans as indicated in your poem. You put us in the middle of the tsunami as is the job of the poet and it almost seemed real. A very good write. Your friend Lynn
Through the art of meditation one can fine tune that 'listening ability' of the soul! You have spoken of 'resonance'! For more than two decades now, Scientists are desperately trying through mathametical models - for a Theory of Everything! They call it M-Theory! There are tiny nano strings vibrating all over cosmos, like the resonance of violin strings! The type of String(open/closed string) and the kind of resonance or vibrations made, - results in creation of all matter in cosmos! In fact the entire Universe vibrates & resonates creating the music of God's philharmonic orchestra! ! So let us tune ourseleves to listen to His heavenly music! FOR YOU POEM 10! -Raj