Monday, February 19, 2018

A Lion In A Zoo Comments

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He cannot entertain the visitors of the zoo
His roar is a warning and a frightening shoo
Like monkeys he cannot entertain the humans
Though he's not having very good relations
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 February 2018

Please open the gates I shall not make any harms I'll entertain you, hidden in me are monkey's charms. I shall run wildly to my kingdom of forests Where in a cave my lonely lioness sadly rests..........well expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem shared.

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Khalida Bano Ali 20 February 2018

A great poem with a message, let the animals pass a natural life.

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Loke Kok Yee 19 February 2018

A very touching poem, we take away the freedom of creatures and yet claim to be civilized. A heart-rending plea for freedom written from a heart full of compassion. Thank you sir.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 February 2018

You have brilliantly expressed the Lion's heart! ....Please open the gates I shall not make any harms I'll entertain you, hidden in me aremonkey's charms. I shall run wildly to my kingdom of forests Where in a cave my lonely lioness sadly rests.....Thanks dear sir for sharing...10

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Indira Renganathan 19 February 2018

How beautifully you've examined the lion's heart Akhtar...very very true the lion's helplessness....more true is very very beautiful the poem is

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