Saturday, November 28, 2020

A Line Of Lovers Is Not A Tall Order Comments

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when the heart calls watch your step avoid the fall
when the heart calls stand up proud stand up tall
but I am not very tall this is lucky if heart has a fall
I do not fall as hard or as far as all the unlucky tall
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Terence George Craddock
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Deluke Muwanigwa 28 November 2020

Lovely stuff. I love the play on short tall and the satire. Matters of the heart have no formula. I fell for my missus when i was eighteen she fifteen and we are still measuring each others height 38 years later. Then again these African girls mix some love portions so you can never leave. Its a joke. It was love at first sight....wink!

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Varsha M 28 November 2020

Yes when heart calls do listen But if still you fail to make a difference Just give time. Line 7 through 10 with conservative heart you fail to view the vastness of beauty. And sometimes conservation of heart is all because we fail to see it's existence.

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