Wednesday, September 2, 2009

! ! A Line From His Cheeks Comments

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He gaze at the sky, asking for answers for all his why's
Where have been the stars, only moon beckons afar?
His face is hopeful but sad
His heart full of love but empty
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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 11 September 2009

A fine aesthetic verse full of empathy and care. Nice poem.

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Obinna Eruchie 03 September 2009

How those lines show how depressing the man is in need of love especially these last ones, 'A line draw from his eyes down his cheeks/ Tried to hide, wipe it but it peeks, / Ah...when will he get the completeness he seeks/ How long will he wait, tears flowing profusely/. When can he have the woman he loves immensely? ' Touching to read.

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