Monday, July 14, 2008

A Liminal Fantasy: Between Comments

Rating: 2.0

Between sleep and waking.
Between self…………….

Unrest comes sweetly in the dusk
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Richard Blanch
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Fred Babbin 24 August 2008

This dreamy poem is a dream. So many unfinished ends, as if it were an actual dream, And yet, like your poem, I can't put into words all there is in the situation..

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Anita Atina 16 July 2008

This is a dreamily awake, diffusedly aware poem, loved it. Especially like the first two lines of each stanza Richard.

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