Saturday, November 23, 2019

A Lily Pond Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blue is the colour of the sky
Blue its image in the pond
The blue water lily soaks up
A little of the sky in its folds
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Ruta Mohapatra
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 November 2019

A fabulous poem…wonderful description of the lily pond………..so lucid expression! May favorite lines: “Colours, bright and beautiful/Of the pink lotus and the black stork/Colours, light and ethereal/Of the white lily and the white duck’ Beautifully composed. Full marks!

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Ruta Mohapatra 25 November 2019

Thank you, Dillip, for the generous praise.

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