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This left me speechless. Very well-written, I'd write more but I want to go read your next poem. :)

Profound.....beautiful 10

this poem explains a little why I love the sky and want to see outer space! if u think about it...it all started with a spark but a light can be like...an idea! (cartoons) so all of our stuff got where they are from/by ideas!

Hello friend Janice. This is a remarkable poem, you certainly have the gift. I enjoyed and hope you keep writing. Blessing, LC

I like your imagery and play of words. God is the 'SUN' around which we revolve. Galileo was right after all.