I see a light
A light through your heart
The special heart glows in the dark
Warm me with your melodious heartbeat tonight
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I see a light A light through your heart The special heart glows in the dark Warm me with your melodious heartbeat tonight.......so touching and impressive. Nice beginning. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10
Warm me with your melodious heartbeat tonight Sweetly kill the quietness of the night Come and inspire me for a of song A song of love with sound of heartbeat. a song every night, a love song....... very romantic dear poetess.. dev
A beutyful lyric... sweet exspresion and inspire Big 10 +++++++ congrats. dr. riza
Could you stay a while/Help me finish the song for you/With the hope we still together for long/So I have a chance to sing you..............sweet expression, a lovely poem! (10)
Reminds me of one of my favourite songs: Heart Light by Neil Diamond. And when he sings it live, the house lights are dimmed, so that the audience can totally light up the auditorium with candles, lighters, etc. Now, whenever I hear that song, I will think of your poem. And vice versa. As always, an excellent write, Soul! ! !
Warm me with your melodious heartbeat tonight Sweetly kill the quietness of the night...ohh this is really romantic.. dear poetess. thank u. dev
A marvelous poem having stunning expression. Each and every line is euphonious.This poem has been drizzled from the inner heart of a poet that I appreciate much. Many thanks dear Soul for posting such a gem.
Thats so sweet of you to say that :) I wish sparkles that reside in your mind and heart will keep brighter day by day as if the wall of spaces inside is made of diamond...be that shine, live that fine!
That is the light of sincerity, I think. Thank you very much for sharing a sublime masterpiece.
To be honest when i was writing this poem, it just hitting my head to be written, but i am glad it now stand as one poem that light many hearts, thanks dear :) keep it up for your nice poetry tooo :)
hahahaha! I don't think I'd break your ribs at all! But it is a pleasure to catch your attention and friendship! Thank you so much! Success for you always! ! !
You're welcome n again thanks to you again for warm words, may u always success n feel content of what life offer to your life, with blessing n happiness breathing around your soul, take care
A poem full of sweet feeling, tenderness and love... Only poets can say these words how they are said..... Beautiful at all! Thank you for your visit in my HP page! ! ! A strong hug from Brazil!
Your sweet words also resonate here, thank you sir... And thank you for strong hug just dont break my ribs haha joking :)
inspire me for a of song A song of love with sound of heartbeat every night i want to hear this song of the heart. what a fine poem full of desire and passion. thank you dear poetess. genova
Thanks for reading, the world is a blend of desire and passion though.. so us too
A glowing heart, a passionate heart. I think it is remarkable that you tie these elements to light, to love. So much has been written about dark hearts, about hearts embroiled in the extremes of passion. Perhaps your heart, the heart of light, is the one that captures joy. Well done, Soul.
And your words are so generous to me like a celestial background for my eyes and smile to witness this. Thank you dear MJ Lemon.. :)
I see a light A light through your heart The special heart glows in the dark Warm me with your melodious heartbeat tonight Sweetly kill the quietness of the night Come and inspire me for a of song A song of love with sound of heartbeat Could you stay a while Help me finish the song for you With the hope we still together for long So i have a chance to sing you A song of a every night My love song very nice poem, thank you for sharing this poem with us
I see a light A light through your heart The special heart glows in the dark Warm me with your melodious heartbeat tonight- very nice poem full of love and joy. tony