Tuesday, June 8, 2010

A Light Through Your Heart Comments

Rating: 4.7

I see a light
A light through your heart
The special heart glows in the dark
Warm me with your melodious heartbeat tonight
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Unwritten Soul
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Dr. Antony Theodore 02 January 2021

I see a light A light through your heart The special heart glows in the dark Warm me with your melodious heartbeat tonight- very nice poem full of love and joy. tony

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Anjandev Roy 10 May 2020

Fantastic write....thank u. anjandev roy.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 March 2020

there is light light love in every moment of life

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Kesav Easwaran 05 February 2020

How sweetly romantic! Incessant flow.10+

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Anwer Ghani 25 December 2018

lovely poem. blessings

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2018

I see a light A light through your heart The special heart glows in the dark Warm me with your melodious heartbeat tonight.......so touching and impressive. Nice beginning. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

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Dev Anand 11 August 2018

Warm me with your melodious heartbeat tonight Sweetly kill the quietness of the night Come and inspire me for a of song A song of love with sound of heartbeat. a song every night, a love song....... very romantic dear poetess.. dev

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Riza Braholli 31 July 2018

A beutyful lyric... sweet exspresion and inspire Big 10 +++++++ congrats. dr. riza

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2018

Could you stay a while/Help me finish the song for you/With the hope we still together for long/So I have a chance to sing you..............sweet expression, a lovely poem! (10)

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Richard Wlodarski 31 August 2017

Reminds me of one of my favourite songs: Heart Light by Neil Diamond. And when he sings it live, the house lights are dimmed, so that the audience can totally light up the auditorium with candles, lighters, etc. Now, whenever I hear that song, I will think of your poem. And vice versa. As always, an excellent write, Soul! ! !

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Dev Anand 30 August 2017

Warm me with your melodious heartbeat tonight Sweetly kill the quietness of the night...ohh this is really romantic.. dear poetess. thank u. dev

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 August 2017

A marvelous poem having stunning expression. Each and every line is euphonious.This poem has been drizzled from the inner heart of a poet that I appreciate much. Many thanks dear Soul for posting such a gem.

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Unwritten Soul 09 August 2017

Thats so sweet of you to say that :) I wish sparkles that reside in your mind and heart will keep brighter day by day as if the wall of spaces inside is made of diamond...be that shine, live that fine!

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 August 2017

That is the light of sincerity, I think. Thank you very much for sharing a sublime masterpiece.

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Unwritten Soul 09 August 2017

...and for your pen, Thank you for your light ink!

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Hassan Hayati 26 July 2017

could you stay a while, the romantic verse, full of love,

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Unwritten Soul 26 July 2017

To be honest when i was writing this poem, it just hitting my head to be written, but i am glad it now stand as one poem that light many hearts, thanks dear :) keep it up for your nice poetry tooo :)

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Adilson Pinto 21 June 2017

hahahaha! I don't think I'd break your ribs at all! But it is a pleasure to catch your attention and friendship! Thank you so much! Success for you always! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 24 June 2017

You're welcome n again thanks to you again for warm words, may u always success n feel content of what life offer to your life, with blessing n happiness breathing around your soul, take care

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Adilson Pinto 20 June 2017

A poem full of sweet feeling, tenderness and love... Only poets can say these words how they are said..... Beautiful at all! Thank you for your visit in my HP page! ! ! A strong hug from Brazil!

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Unwritten Soul 21 June 2017

Your sweet words also resonate here, thank you sir... And thank you for strong hug just dont break my ribs haha joking :)

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Genova Maaa 15 June 2017

inspire me for a of song A song of love with sound of heartbeat every night i want to hear this song of the heart. what a fine poem full of desire and passion. thank you dear poetess. genova

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Unwritten Soul 15 June 2017

Thanks for reading, the world is a blend of desire and passion though.. so us too

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Mj Lemon 07 June 2017

A glowing heart, a passionate heart. I think it is remarkable that you tie these elements to light, to love. So much has been written about dark hearts, about hearts embroiled in the extremes of passion. Perhaps your heart, the heart of light, is the one that captures joy. Well done, Soul.

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Unwritten Soul 09 June 2017

And your words are so generous to me like a celestial background for my eyes and smile to witness this. Thank you dear MJ Lemon.. :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 December 2016

Glows! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Offeliya Seema 18 November 2016

I see a light A light through your heart The special heart glows in the dark Warm me with your melodious heartbeat tonight Sweetly kill the quietness of the night Come and inspire me for a of song A song of love with sound of heartbeat Could you stay a while Help me finish the song for you With the hope we still together for long So i have a chance to sing you A song of a every night My love song very nice poem, thank you for sharing this poem with us

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