Just love me from afar,
See how I flourish
Too up, close and personal
I have seen it perish,
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a chance at love, I like it, thanks. please read my poems and comment.
Exquisite is the word that comes to mind. An elegant and delicate write. A perfect 10 yet again.
wowwww.... this is breezy and very cool write indeed... you use the language in a manner that the reader can feel the water flowing through his veins.. And I like the note in which you end the poem..... nice to read.. kind of have a soothing effect on reader's wearied mind.. lovees shan
nOT ASKING TOO MUCH is better than nothin asked.A ligh drizzle is that all you want, soon will shower you with heavy flood.Nice piece Mamta.
Every stanza of this poem displays its subtle charm. So, 'Mamta'in every way. Lovely... Warm regards, Sandra
This charming poem made me smile...very lovely and well-crafted lines..full of true emotion..thanks for sharing, Mamta. Amary.
sweet metaphor-> sweet words-> sweet verses-->sweetly titillating-->sweet and thoughtful POEM indeed! 10000++++
it is a lovely poem of love, mellowed from a downpour to a light soothing drizzle, which willbe like a assuarance, of a lasting love.great write mamta, the lines are too good, and i really enjoyed going through this poem.
Come, not as storm That drowns my being; Come as a spring With a flowery swing, With all its fragrance That lingers on Like the sweet memories Of the days foregone. CP
lovely and a very reasonable request...we don't enjoy a storm..it seems like anger to us..we enjoy may as you say a flirting breeze...similarly we may not stand out on a torrential rain a gentle drizzle...beautiful expressions
Neither physical nor spiritual, you are asking for a new releationship in love which is very much emotional in its essence but very gentle and smooth in nature with steadiness and composure of passions. I think you are pointing to a new dimension of love and opening a new vista for lovers. A very fine piece of write, Mamta...10/10. Regards Naseer
a great write... ideas with depth... very nice to read... 10+++ lovelots, Maia
If wishes were horses rain drops would ride they wont fall off the horses back and the earth shall be dry Its good wishes are wishes and not horse, so you and me can be hopeful of a drizzle, during our course(of life) good write....
You ordered a light drizzle, ma'am? OK...one light drizzle coming up....sizzling hot, delicious, to set you on fire....[if it doesn't drench the ardor]. Hmmmm....if wishes were horses....the trick is getting the right dose of everything we need. But no harm praying or wishing..... Have a nice day.... Cheers. Subroto
Another lovely piece Mamta..replete with meaningful metaphors and a gentle word flow...
Very sweet, tender and a mature poem, mamta! What one requires to ignite the fire ought to be same as ' a light drizzle........! ' My compliments! !
A light drizzle. What a beautiful metaphor. Sweet, gentle love, instead of passionate, overwhelming love. And not a full fledged one either, at that! Our gender has truly become mystically feminine. Baffling the other one.
Love me lightly like a drizzle "just love me from afar"