Wednesday, August 30, 2006

A Lifting Of My Heart Comments

Rating: 4.7

I stepped over the rickety wooden stile,
and entered a meadow of sweetness.
Clover, daisies and buttercups
all intermingled in a silent chorus of song.
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Ernestine Northover
COMMENTS
Kesav Easwaran 15 July 2008

i can see the longing.. for the lifing of a poetic heart in tandem with a bunch of joyous birds taking to air...good poets bring out lines beautified from what they see around and place them on a poetic platter... good lines such as these...10

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Philip Housiaux 18 May 2008

crucial observations and feelings are caught. good work

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Hemakumar Nanayakkara 20 April 2008

An amazing poem about the beauties of nature. It was an absolute serene piece of write.

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David Stansfield 07 April 2008

Lovely, lovely! It reminds me of summer. Will it come this year.

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Lillian J. 01 April 2008

Imageful and beautiful work! Lilly :)

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Andrew Blakemore 28 February 2008

This poem is so beautiful, lovely imagery. Andrew x

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CU2urDream Lost 11 January 2008

This is a whole trust when irritation come, obey and carry out his word in dealing with them this is a super natural reponse and its wonderfully penned from you...lovely Ernestine.

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Ivor Hogg 22 August 2007

The finest therapy for a weary soul just get out into the open air and use your eyes and ears to full extent. We miss so much concentrating on work most often confined within the souless vista of a city

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Meggie Gultiano 21 August 2007

what a wonderful gift the Lord has given to us..to enjoy nature! i join with you in expressing my delight in seeing wonderful creatures crerated by a wonderful God..oh, thanks for this, Ernestine! love it..top marks from me.. love and hugs, Meggie

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Marci Made 28 June 2007

this is an awesome an up lifting poem...I walk away feeling uplifted and carefree..This is a gift about nature from a soul filled with a love for it. This is how I feel after times on the islands, the shore, and the peace and calm and treasures it always offers me....You are one of many here who are a pure delight to read.~~~marci.xo. :)

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Lola Cunningham 16 March 2007

Ernestine, I just joined poemhunter and was lucky enough to come upon your poems. I love your writing, for it comes not from your pen, but from your heart.

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Jim Foulk 09 February 2007

Ernestine, this was a wonderful piece you wrote, really liked it.

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Melvina Germain 10 September 2006

Ernestine, once again a wonderful poem comes to life. You painted a beautiful picture, I could see myself running through your lovely paradise-Excellent------Melvina

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Steve Hagget 05 September 2006

As someone always trying to write about nature I found this inspiring and beautifully written... steve

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Uriah Hamilton 03 September 2006

This is very beautiful, I wish St. Francis could read it, and maybe he has! !

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Chuck Audette 01 September 2006

Uplifting to anyone who loves nature. Well-done. Of course, the checking for ticks afterwards helps bring us back to earth... -chuck

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Alison Cassidy 31 August 2006

An most pleasing pastoral poem Ernestine. I can hear the music of Beethoven's 6th as I read. It certainly lifts the heart of this reader. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Francesca Johnson 31 August 2006

Delightful, Ernestine....this poem would lift ANYONE'S heart....it's beautiful. Love, Fran xx

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Tailor Bell 30 August 2006

a feelgood read and beautiful imagery. enjoyable start to finish...splendid work, Ernestine. i love the initial entry into this vision 'over the rickety wooden stile' as if it's tucked away just for you. -Tailor

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Duncan Wyllie 30 August 2006

It would seem that both Tara and myself had the same stanza at heart, the whole poem is so beautiful, whether we choose one part or collectively, its just brilliant Love duncan X

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