I stepped over the rickety wooden stile,
and entered a meadow of sweetness.
Clover, daisies and buttercups
all intermingled in a silent chorus of song.
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An amazing poem about the beauties of nature. It was an absolute serene piece of write.
Lovely, lovely! It reminds me of summer. Will it come this year.
This is a whole trust when irritation come, obey and carry out his word in dealing with them this is a super natural reponse and its wonderfully penned from you...lovely Ernestine.
The finest therapy for a weary soul just get out into the open air and use your eyes and ears to full extent. We miss so much concentrating on work most often confined within the souless vista of a city
what a wonderful gift the Lord has given to us..to enjoy nature! i join with you in expressing my delight in seeing wonderful creatures crerated by a wonderful God..oh, thanks for this, Ernestine! love it..top marks from me.. love and hugs, Meggie
this is an awesome an up lifting poem...I walk away feeling uplifted and carefree..This is a gift about nature from a soul filled with a love for it. This is how I feel after times on the islands, the shore, and the peace and calm and treasures it always offers me....You are one of many here who are a pure delight to read.~~~marci.xo. :)
Ernestine, I just joined poemhunter and was lucky enough to come upon your poems. I love your writing, for it comes not from your pen, but from your heart.
Ernestine, this was a wonderful piece you wrote, really liked it.
Ernestine, once again a wonderful poem comes to life. You painted a beautiful picture, I could see myself running through your lovely paradise-Excellent------Melvina
As someone always trying to write about nature I found this inspiring and beautifully written... steve
This is very beautiful, I wish St. Francis could read it, and maybe he has! !
Uplifting to anyone who loves nature. Well-done. Of course, the checking for ticks afterwards helps bring us back to earth... -chuck
An most pleasing pastoral poem Ernestine. I can hear the music of Beethoven's 6th as I read. It certainly lifts the heart of this reader. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Delightful, Ernestine....this poem would lift ANYONE'S heart....it's beautiful. Love, Fran xx
a feelgood read and beautiful imagery. enjoyable start to finish...splendid work, Ernestine. i love the initial entry into this vision 'over the rickety wooden stile' as if it's tucked away just for you. -Tailor
It would seem that both Tara and myself had the same stanza at heart, the whole poem is so beautiful, whether we choose one part or collectively, its just brilliant Love duncan X
i can see the longing.. for the lifing of a poetic heart in tandem with a bunch of joyous birds taking to air...good poets bring out lines beautified from what they see around and place them on a poetic platter... good lines such as these...10