Wednesday, July 11, 2012

A Lifting Of Birds Comments

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Hard as an empty factory, a sea of glass
eaves brown with rust and first rain

squares of light oblongate through broken panes
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Leslie Philibert
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 09 May 2014

I enjoy your usage of words here, and in your work in general. there are layers of images to explore in this piece.

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Bri Edwards 24 January 2013

i agree with other comments. now i'll look at another. t.f.s. bri

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Aivilo Gnuoy 08 August 2012

Interesting but I dont quite understand the poem.

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Leslie Philibert

Leslie Philibert

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