Sunday, March 25, 2012

A Lifetime In Your Hands Comments

Rating: 5.0

Baby. 

On the floor they lay
Not a wrinkle or crease to save
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Robert Green
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Yasmin Khan 08 May 2013

The writer has traced age through hands describing it's stages.Interestingly hands start from a wave to play to wave to a sigh, a bit of drama but the whole life is a drama with different acts, penned thoughtfully.

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Valerie Dohren 31 March 2012

Like this Robert, rather be at the beginning of the poem rather than the end though! ! !

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Shahzia Batool 28 March 2012

A modern version of the all time great imagery of Shakespeare's celebrated 7 stages in Man's life... but irony is...these days Death doesn't wait for all the stages to be completed....Here the effect of passing time is shown through HANDS...this is new....

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