A Lifespan Comments

good poem. life has become complex too.

Great poem here Very well written

You know Marvin, majority of folks are more worried to find out about their life's span, than trying to enjoy this God given life and be helpful to other! - Raj Nandy

Keep inking them this one is very well written you are a great poet!

Solid penning Marvin, a brilliant write indeed! ! ! *10*! ! Thanks for sharing! ! Friend Thad

Great poem from the blink of your keen eyes. thanks for sharing this. best wishes, melvin

the Essence of Mind enlightenment Buddhahood

i wanted a longer lifespan..............

I feel that this is one of your best yet. t x

Philosophical, & erudite expression, Marvin...Job well done. ~ FjR ~