A Life Without Pain Comments

Pity not, hate not, and hurt not For this life of God, I wish to live the most.........................great work....

I thought you were describing the life of a leper...... Yes, leprosy can be an inner affliction too! If one becomes insensitive to pain and joy, life becomes dull! But this insensitivity can become noble and exalted, if seen from an austere angle! A very moving write, Deepak!

In between bed of thorn and roses life proceeds in same way shows a nice perception about life. Living for God with life with self realization is definitely aspired. Very beautifully presented every line. Nice job.

Beautiful poem with many captivating lines...... And if possible spare some love A friendly voice to soothe and cheer So that I can live rest of life with love Honour and grace Pity not, hate not, and hurt not For this life of God, I wish to live the most Positive flow of words. Really this poem gives a soothing effect while reading. Beautiful presentation. Loved it. +++10