My heart aches, for those like you
Who don't know where they're going, Don't know what to do.
Never given any encouragement, protection or self worth.
And never feeling love. Not even at birth.
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It reads even better the second time. Well done my friend!
A lovely poem with hopes to live and the courage behind.... simply loved it
I don't see how this could possibly not make someone smile. Thanks for the hope. :)
Bursting with beauty. A mountain of motivation. Pregnant with positivity! Well done my friend!
Through writing poetry I can see how I've grown and where I'm going - your poem brought that out - never think of it that way. Every poem is just an instant in the reality of life. Really like your poetry, look forward to reading more of it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Good poem with deep meaning. Read mine - We The Unencumbered - Adeline
A fine cellebration of resilliance, triumph over adversity with the fuel of love and a nurturing helping hand to power self determination.
This is a great poem and I'm sure so any can relate to the moral story of hope
Inspirational and a conduit to an open and exploring mind. Great stuff.
Delighted poem with shiny words....Lyn, if our life is without door i am sure there will also not any wall....as free as we can we may get...a good encouraging poem, always good to read a positive poem like this! _Soul
Oh what it is to be loved. This is a delightful inspirational poem of hope.10/10
Despondency should not grab us. Tomorrow, there will get in a ray thru a hole.It will help you to trace the door. Superb write!
Many spend their lives behind closed doors, rarely catching a glimpse of the sun. Deep and thought-provoking.
the life is the learning process and the whole world is the institution! do we have the doors? Beautiful poem! Lyn..
In any work my favorite deep symbols are Sea, waves, curtains, doors and windows....all relate to human life and bonding...this is a poem with depth n insight vision! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
So nicely envisioned. The life is the learning process and the whole world is the institution! Well expressed. Thanks for sharing......10