Friday, May 10, 2013

A Life With No Door Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart aches, for those like you
Who don't know where they're going, Don't know what to do.
Never given any encouragement, protection or self worth.
And never feeling love. Not even at birth.
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Lyn Paul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2015

So nicely envisioned. The life is the learning process and the whole world is the institution! Well expressed. Thanks for sharing......10

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It reads even better the second time. Well done my friend!

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Amitava Sur 03 May 2014

A lovely poem with hopes to live and the courage behind.... simply loved it

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Hannah Wolton-carr 19 April 2014

I don't see how this could possibly not make someone smile. Thanks for the hope. :)

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Bursting with beauty. A mountain of motivation. Pregnant with positivity! Well done my friend!

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Bijay Poudel 02 January 2014

A good write abt hope and faith. Keep up the good work.

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Roseann Shawiak 13 December 2013

Through writing poetry I can see how I've grown and where I'm going - your poem brought that out - never think of it that way. Every poem is just an instant in the reality of life. Really like your poetry, look forward to reading more of it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Adeline Foster 07 December 2013

Good poem with deep meaning. Read mine - We The Unencumbered - Adeline

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Heather Wilkins 15 July 2013

give and you will receive. nice poem of hope and the future

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Danny Draper 05 July 2013

A fine cellebration of resilliance, triumph over adversity with the fuel of love and a nurturing helping hand to power self determination.

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Jason Atkinson 02 July 2013

This is a great poem and I'm sure so any can relate to the moral story of hope

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Mark Dillon 12 June 2013

Inspirational and a conduit to an open and exploring mind. Great stuff.

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Unwritten Soul 14 May 2013

Delighted poem with shiny words....Lyn, if our life is without door i am sure there will also not any wall....as free as we can we may get...a good encouraging poem, always good to read a positive poem like this! _Soul

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David Wood 13 May 2013

Oh what it is to be loved. This is a delightful inspirational poem of hope.10/10

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Neela Nath Das 12 May 2013

Despondency should not grab us. Tomorrow, there will get in a ray thru a hole.It will help you to trace the door. Superb write!

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Valerie Dohren 12 May 2013

Many spend their lives behind closed doors, rarely catching a glimpse of the sun. Deep and thought-provoking.

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the life is the learning process and the whole world is the institution! do we have the doors? Beautiful poem! Lyn..

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Shahzia Batool 11 May 2013

In any work my favorite deep symbols are Sea, waves, curtains, doors and windows....all relate to human life and bonding...this is a poem with depth n insight vision! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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