Monday, January 5, 2009

A Life Wasted Comments

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you never know until it's too late
that everything you put your hand
to fades & dissolves in the sun
of an aroused intellect
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Michael Pruchnicki
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Sadiqullah Khan 31 December 2009

The descendo is as touching as the life wasted and still in the process.

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Eyelizabeth Unknown 03 July 2009

deeply moving in an out of emotion - niiice

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Lacie Wasserman 10 June 2009

Very deep I loved it :) kinda hard to understand at first but I got it Thumbs up for me

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James Mclain 24 April 2009

I was ready for the words last confession to slowly flow into the flame of ablutions mirror of an eye that slowly closes for the last time...iip

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